Originally Posted by
kilt2def
I agree with the sentiment, but do me a favor and remove the commas after 'I saw you' before you repost this anywhere else. They are incorrect and unecessary, and in the worst case change the intended meaning of the sentence.
"I saw you go home to your family"
== You went home to your family, and I saw you do it.
"I saw you, go home to your family."
== I saw you, and I order you to go home to your family.
/pedant mode off
ok two things .....
1 this was copied and pasted and posted ...I did not write this nor do I take credit for its inception and as its very long ...I really dont want to spend alot of time correcting it when it gets the point across just fine as is
2 this is a poem .....the whole thing is saying "I saw you but you didnt see me " hence the I saw you at the begining of each sentence..... I think the commas are intended as a pause.
oh nevermind
KFP
Irish diplomacy: is telling a man to go to he)) in such a way that he looks forward to the trip!
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