I think you did a great job putting that outfit together! I'm glad the kilt length worked out for you.

A couple of tweaks I would make or at least explore to see if you like them

Bring the flashes forward just a titch (1 titch = 1/2 a scosh = approximately 7 hairs). This will give a bit more color to the folk looking at you from the front.

Make sure the knot on the tie is straight and framed snuggly by the collar. I like a nice tight knot as small as you can get it, but that is hard when we have to shorten the tie so much, the knot falls at a very wide part of the tie.

You've put it all together very well, enjoy!