If they've extended the deadline until Halloween, and you just "threw that one together" during a week, why not do up another one? I'll lay odds that, even if they'd not accept double entries, they'd let you replace your current entry.

That paragraph sounds negative, and it shouldn't be taken that way! I quite liked it. I did notice a couple of things, though. Me, I'd iron the UK before using it in the shot. After all, it's a Mockumercial, but that is just a Mock Commercial---I'd show the UK at it's best. (A counterargument would be that it looks good even wrinkly.)

Also, you showed a couple of outfits for the wife. The essentials of a wardrobe, right? And not just the neutral colored two inch heels, either, but a choice of outfits, both the little black dress and the hip hugging jeans. What about showing you in a couple of outfits, deciding what to go out in? UK and dress shirt, tie and bomber jacket, with hose and deck shoes. UK and sweater. THEN go with the broken in t-shirt.

Intended in a very constructive way! I'm not a jerk, I just play one on the internet sometimes.