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6th March 08, 08:25 AM
#101
Closing Scene
Ritchgarl Manor Apartment Building
I had taken Ms. Ritchgarl back to her residence, an upscale building owned by her parents corporation.
“I want to thank you so much,” she said to me outside her door.
I opened the door for her. “It was a privilege, all in the line of duty.”
“You’re not leaving already are you?” she asked.
“Yes, I’m afraid I have to go. Mike is due to call me at any moment.”
“But,” she said, reaching out to run her finger along the buttons of my shirt, “I haven’t found out what’s under your kilt yet.” She gave me a playful smile.
Just then my cell phone started to ring. I glanced at the caller ID. It was Mike.
I looked back at Emma. She had stepped into her apartment. She beckoned me inside with her finger.
I smiled back at her. “Mike can wait.” I stepped into the apartment, tossing my phone onto the small table there. I closed and locked the door behind me.
Last edited by davedove; 6th March 08 at 11:25 AM.
We're fools whether we dance or not, so we might as well dance. - Japanese Proverb
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6th March 08, 08:25 AM
#102
Acknowledgements and Thanks
I hope you liked my second tale. There will definitely be more stories in the future. I already have one in mind, but it definitely needs to be developed.
Thanks to the former kidnap victims:
Riverkilt
Graham
Hamish
Andrew Breecher
To the staff at the Great Hall of X Marks the Scot:
Mike1
Cajunscot
Panache
Colin
Kiltedmusiclover
Freelander Sporrano
Tattoo Bradley
Starbkjrus
McMurdo
Prestor John, our chaplain
Many thanks to X Marks own security team:
Splash_4
BEEDEE
Weasel Mender
And our canine troop Wompet
To Grant’s forces
ccga3359
Big Mikey
MacHummel
And one unnamed shadowy figure
Dirka Skene and Celtic Menace
Livingston and Erisianmonkey for their help on the team
The California members who provided the hook for the story
James MacMillan
Coemgen
Crusty
Ozman1944
Rigged
The other partygoers
CactusJack
Kilted John Sporrano
Arizona Scot
And the stars of my commercials:
Mike1 for Formula X
Splash_4, BEEDEE, Weasel Mender for X Power bars
Freelander Sporrano and cga3359 for X-Charge Extreme batteries
The Wizard of BC for the FK Coffee Delivery System
Panache for X-Flakes cereal
Sciuropterus for the Sciuropterus Delivery Service
Livingston and Erisianmonkey for X marks the Scot
And the brief mention of McClef, congrats on your new title.
Last edited by davedove; 10th April 08 at 10:47 AM.
We're fools whether we dance or not, so we might as well dance. - Japanese Proverb
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6th March 08, 12:35 PM
#103
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6th March 08, 12:40 PM
#104
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6th March 08, 12:57 PM
#105
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6th March 08, 03:01 PM
#106
 Originally Posted by davedove
Acknowledgements and Thanks
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The California members who provided the hook for the story
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Coemgen
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Anytime!
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6th March 08, 04:57 PM
#107
Fun Stuff Dave,
Next time your group should go across the pond and work with the MHICE!
 Originally Posted by davedove
...It was then that I noticed the large object above us. A large blimp was moving over us.... One set of lights revealed a large red maple leaf on the side of the airship...“YOU FOOLS! YOU CANNOT HOLD ME! BY MY GORGEOUS, FLOWING, GOLDEN LOCKS AND FIRM ROUND BUTTOCKS YOU WILL NEVER HOLD ME! HA HA HA HA HA HA!” he cackled madly
Tsk, Tsk it appears Grant has a new blimp.
Something shall have to be done about this!* 
Cheers
Jamie
* I have got to stop hanging out with Freelander Sporrano!
-See it there, a white plume
Over the battle - A diamond in the ash
Of the ultimate combustion-My panache
Edmond Rostand
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6th March 08, 05:19 PM
#108
Where is my kilt check? I was promised a kilt check. Big Mikey get my agent on the phone...
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6th March 08, 05:26 PM
#109
Acknowledgements and Thanks
CactusJack
Dave, My thanks go to you for allowing me to be in one of your fantastic storie, Feel free to use me at any time in any of you upcoming stories and I look forward to the next one..
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6th March 08, 06:20 PM
#110
To Panache
Herr Kaptain,
I have just recently restocked and expanded the capacity of my quivers. I also have finished development of my new repeating compound bow and and am ready to test it, Does this give you any ideas? 
Ens Mender
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