except I'm not sure what the edge of your apron is doing there...it's all bunched up. I'm guessing it normally lays flat ok? The sporran, as you have indicated, is a bit 'rustic'...but I rather like it. The hose look good with the garter ties...perhaps a bit baggy...looks like they're brand new. Blue would also look great. No real negative feedback here...all in all, you've passed!