I am not opposed to the general concept, but the design execution falls short, particularly at the bottom of the rear join and how the fabric is along the 2 and 10 o'clock positions.
The bottom of the rear join is just off, and too distracting. If you are going to be distracted by part of a skirt, it shouldn't be by an odd fabric join that looks like something is poking up from underneath.
You could do an improved version. Let the world be distracted by what should really be distracting us.