Dooley Tartan?

[Captain]

Okay, due to everyone else making tartans online and the very cool tartan generator some of you linked to here, I have decided to try my hand at a tartan for my family. I took (as a basis) the pattern of the Cian tartan as that would be our clan tartan, and completely redid the colors with colors more to my family's liking... we're big on earth-tones and orange... with a few who really like blue... Anyway, here's what I came up with. What are your honest opinions? I've never done something like this, so be brutally honest... would it work? Would you wear it? What would you change?